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3rd Feb 2020, 8:00 AM

...yeah, I believe it's long been established I have very little idea what I'm doing, so let's just have fun with it and see what comes about!

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3rd Feb 2020, 12:25 PM

Honestly, I think it's clever to have Peridot's explanation of the Cluster happen because they had no idea how to actually move the plot forward.

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Phantomdemon (Guest)

3rd Feb 2020, 11:27 PM

Easy way to move it forward.

Have the earth shake, indicating it's "Happening" and then have them scramble to make the machine.

I mean, it's still pretty much powered by the plot, but there's a bit of that in all stories like this.

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