Hopefully this works. If it didn't, well...it didn't and I'll be really disappointed, and will do what I can to break it into 3 'single size' pages though considering how much this first portion of the song flows together it's hard to want to.
Next page provided this went well will be tomorrow, Tuesday.
I don't think its working
I actually meant more about the size of the page. I uploaded it to an image host site instead of uploading directly to comicfury, as it exceeded the file size limit.
Lol, oh. Seems like it works for some people and not others? Weird.
Calum Traveler (Guest)
I think it's worked pretty well so far! :D
It's a delightfully chaotic page. If you broke it apart, it would just come back newer. :P Errr, I mean, you'd lose that charm.
Heheh, I liked how this went. You got the flow of the song down surprisingly well in comic form, and I'm curious how people will react to the chorus.
I can't see it
is that just me or are other people having the same problem
Eh, I guess it depends from reader to reader.
For me, it does not flow very well, but I have a problem with songs showing up in comics, they never quite flow alright to me in comic form. Maybe if the actual song plays while I read it would help, but then it would need to be more than just a comic. It would need to be something like the animated segments on Homestuck or the turbomedia comics made by Balak01.
So, yeah, it's not just you, we problably just have a problem seeing it. Or the other readers just want to be nice. Or they have better imaginations for musical flow in comics.
Daemon Keido (Guest)
"Let's go, just me an you!"
"As if! It's one on two!"
I don't know how you ďid it but you made the song better with that line. Well done!
I'm didn't have any problems getting the page to load, so it definitely works. (At least it works on my phone)
Jailbreak is one of my favorite episodes of Steven Universe and it's mostly due to this fight. Other favorite episodes are Giant Woman, Joy Ride, Nightmare Hospital, Beach City Drift, Log Date 7.15.2, Earthlings, and Know Your Fusion.
Panel...15? That finger wag. So sassy, I love it.
There's a typo in panel 16, "I think he's just made that he's single." I'm assuming it's supposed to be "I think he's just mad that he's single."
I also find it fun that you have a guy playing Jasper as I am always tripping over myself and referring to Jasper as male, probably because Jasper is a male name in the real world (and also a guy with a big beard in Simpsons :D) that and I always felt Jasper is one of the more androgynous Gems in appearance and voice.
It was good? Maybe? Hoping for the rest. Also dat von Karma finger