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Bonnie Breaks Down in Coach Steven
31st Mar 2017, 8:30 AM
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31st Mar 2017, 8:30 AM

Next page will be Monday.

I had a REALLY hard time figuring out how to adapt this...harder than you'd think really, but in the end I like how I went with it.

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31st Mar 2017, 9:13 AM

Old school poll
What state or country are you from?
Me: Down south Georgia

31st Mar 2017, 11:28 AM

Originally New York but moved out to New Mexico when I was a kid.

31st Mar 2017, 2:52 PM

I for one really like where you're going with this. I'm a fan of Campaign Comics that don't just follow the source 1:1 and take advantage of the setting. Specifically in Crystal GMs I like how a few times you've taken major character moments from the show and instead of just having them be RP moments for the RPG characters you've had them be for the players instead, such as Bonnie and Marceline's issues from the Giant Woman arc.

In short, keep up the great work! :D

31st Mar 2017, 4:41 PM

Another one I personally loved was the different origin story for Amethyst. Way better in this than in the show.

3rd Apr 2017, 2:04 AM

that's all good, but now i can't unsee Pearl Boogers. I didn' even know she had Nostrils... like 90% of her nose seems unnecessary with them so close to her face...

Someone get that Birdmom a tissue!

31st Mar 2017, 9:27 PM

Rick? Who's Rick?

Is there a Morty involved?

31st Mar 2017, 10:34 PM

Rick Bloom of D&DAangvanced...not Rick Sanchez, aka the Rickiest Rick to ever Rick-roll. C'mon, you wanna get schwifty!!

3rd Apr 2017, 2:01 AM

Szechaun Sauce anyone?

3rd Apr 2017, 6:38 AM

Sorry to comment again on the same page but... after all this Drama, it would be hilarious for Sugilite to lose because she suddenly rolled a Crit-fail and hit herself with her Flail, which has a +Damage on Crit-fails for being a unwieldy as fuck weapon.

Would give No closure to Pearl, and be a sudden Brick Wall to the event.

Cuz that shit happens in real games XD

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