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Grilling an Onion in Indirect Kiss
17th Jun 2016, 8:00 AM
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Grilling an Onion

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17th Jun 2016, 8:00 AM

Next comic will be Monday

This is a parody, and is not endorsed by Cartoon Network, or the people who make Steven Universe. This is purely for fun.

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19th Jun 2016, 6:50 AM

Not sure why Onion was beating around the bush... but i get the feeling the Intimidation took the form of steven holding his breath untill Onion fessed up :P

19th Jun 2016, 6:52 AM

Why do i suddenly get the feeling that Jasper is going to be Refurbished as Colonel Amber? Cuz both those gems are orange colored?

Regardless, be careful with Jasper, the Crewniverse admitted that Jasper is... more Complicated then she seems, and she may still yet join the gems... her color would fit in the spectrum they're forming, too.

....Deja vu, did i say this before, i really can't remember... ._.

19th Jun 2016, 10:43 PM

Technically they were Admiral Amber and Colonel Citrine: alliteration for the win. I'll admit though I hadn't considered that possibility. I just might, but I do have things mostly planned out on that. But that isn't for a while yet; haven't even introduced Lapis Lazuli yet.

21st Jun 2016, 6:13 AM

For her I would suggest giving her a history with the Crystal Gems, to amp up the "Oh Shit!" Moment she is release, but as her backstory is still developing(some things seem to not... Entirely add up with the stuff she recently told Steven, according to some analyzers..), you might write yourself into a corner, and trust me, that sucks!

A good fix Is to have them have faught -A- Lapis Lazuli-Type Gem, which normally aren't that big a threat, but earth is over half water.

Would also better explain why the CG's never tried to release/question her... They, OOC and IC, don't' want to fight another one...

Add a layer is tragedy and mention that they were supposed to Free her when they found her, and she would of joined them, with the DM being a we bit bitter about basically avoiding meeting a helpful NPC she may of had a lot of material riding on >:D

Still, citrine and amber aside, giving them some form of history with Jasper would allow for a severe "oh shit" moment, when not just Lapis, and the unknown dangers of peridot step off the handship, but also someone from the distant past that they may f already fears, and perhaps thought dead/shattered... I find triggering massive "oh god no" moments in my players to be entirely too fun, and I have to assume other DMs feel the same way!

.... I need to stop commenting on stuff without sleeping for over 22 hours... I ramble on and on...

Really I am just trying to be helpful and provide idea's, insight on the canon and how it can be manipulated to tell a more unique story, and give you, the writer, a sense that someone likes your work enough to actively help you improve in any meager way I can...

Wether you find a use for it or not, Lion's original concept art is something more people need to know about... Nightmare fuel or not. ;P

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